lennox « Thread Started on Sept 20, 2008, 6:11pm »
Name:- lennox McCould
Alibi:- the heartless one
Age:- 17
Species:- vampire
Group/Rank: moon clan/ Fulks
Personality:- Lennox is the type of guy that would rather not fight, but is forced to fight he will. He is layed back ,and fun loving. Lennox becomes a different person when he is forced to fight it is all most like is a daemon. angry and blood thirsty. Lennox would rather not drink human blood but if he has to he will. His will to live on is one thing that will never change about lennox, but if he dose drink from a human it is only from a blood bag. Even tho it is only a blood bag he would rather not brink human blood. Weakness:- he is a sucker when it comes to love
Powers/Strength:- his strength is his ability to think clearly in battle and plan ahead
Appearance:-
Family:- murdered the night he left home
History:- as child lennox was all ways different. he was all ways building or watching some thing. as a kid he study the things around him learning what ever he could. At the age of fifteen he had realized things that took soccers years to learn. he was a bright child and every thing looked good for him till that triable night of his sixteenth birthday. When he saw his family murdered infront of him lennox was cowering in a corner. When a female vampire found him and took pity on him, and took lennox and showed him there ways. She did not bite him right away letting him grow so he could become her fuhrer lover, bit yet again his life was changed when his new found clan was attacked. he was bitten that night and told to run as far as his legs would take him. that night along with power he was given a sword that is said to have power locked away. Lennox now wonders around looking for the killers of his clan, and a new place to call home.
Joined: Nov 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 82 Location: A Dark Cafe. Karma: 1
Re: lennox « Reply #1 on Sept 22, 2008, 1:30am »
Okay I shall let you know now since Carmen hasn't looked over yet. I can already tell you that your character is going to have to have a group. there are no loners allowed.
Joined: Aug 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 329 Location: under your bed Karma: 4
Re: lennox « Reply #2 on Sept 26, 2008, 2:16pm »
This is pretty good for a first bio :] And Kashira is right, rouges and loners are banned for now, until we get more members. I really want to beef up the Clans and cults etc first before we go off making extras. The only way you can really get a vampire that's not in a Clan right now is if they own shops, and I usually would like to see how you write and how often you're on etc before you get the responsibility of having that.
If you want a suggestion for a Clan, I think that based on your character's personality, he would fit in with the Moon Clan. They are the most humane and caring of the vampires, and most of them try to abstain from drinking human blood, or being cruel about it. You should read up on all of the Clans, though, and decide which one you'd like.
As for your character's powers, I reserve things like that for the leaders, and maybe an exception now and then if I think it's necessary or exceptionally creative. If you have a regular vampire, you would fill in powers with a skill they are exceptional at-- can they memorize things, are they good at manipulating, etc. Read up on that information too.
So just edit those things and I think you're all set. As anyone on here can tell you, I'm pretty strict with the first bio sheet so that you get in the habit of certain things. It's a pain, I know.
I DO like that you included pictures of the weapons-- I know nothing about weapons, and it's great that I can picture something specific in my head when I read your posts.
So, edit the powers, pick a Clan-- and a rank WITHIN that Clan-- and you're all set.
Joined: Aug 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 329 Location: under your bed Karma: 4
Re: lennox « Reply #4 on Oct 24, 2008, 8:42pm »
Okay just A TEENY BIT MORE. sorry this is taking so long-- that's completely my fault. What do you mean by new blood? If you don't want a rank for your vampire, just put misc. If you DO, just pick one of the ranks listed in the vamp section-- fulk, frin, flit, etc. And again, special powers are reserved for the leaders. So the whole shadow thing just needs to get cut out. I'll check back as soon as I can so it can get accepted once these have been fixed. I apologize again, and thank you. Carmen
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